Episode
broadcast 12th August 2011
Written
by Russell T Davies and John Shiban
This episode began to get
down to the nitty gritty. It was steering the story in the direction of Phicorp
and who they could be. It also leads to a dramatic cliff hanger for the next
episode Immortal Sins. We meet a
familiar face (if you’re a fan of Ghostbusters – took me long enough to realise
that) and learn of his role in the episode. It’s an interesting dinner date
with Stuart and Captain Jack.
It’s sky scrapers and
office romances, where deals are made and sometimes broken. Of men in control
but not of all the facts. Stuart is busy in his sky scraper office at Phicorp
HQ, in LA, when his secretary calls reminding him of his meeting with Phicorp
executive board at four o’clock. She also tells him of the paperwork she’s
pulled together on the Shanghai deal. Stuart is not his usual self, and Janet
picks up on that. He insists he’s fine, couldn’t be happier and insists she
call him Mr Owens at the office.
On the television, a
psychiatrist is explaining that suicide is impossible now, since the miracle,
but people are still finding ways to get as close to death as possible.
‘It’s
the philosophy of the 45 Club. People who believe that jumping from forty-five
floors up or higher is the only guaranteed way to lose consciousness forever.’
Stuart Owens makes a call
to Zheng in Shanghai, China. It’s 11pm over there. Stuart insists the
information he requests is for his eyes only. Zheng complies.
‘In
1999 a large parcel of land near Shanghai centre was purchased by a division of
PhiCorp. That’s where the records end. I need to know exactly what’s happened
to the land since then.’
‘PhiCorp construction?’
‘Not on paper. There are subsidiaries, shell
companies.’ Stuart
says.
‘May I ask what this is about?’
‘Do you need to know?’
‘It could be of some help’.
‘Of course, you are aware of the changes
going on in the world.’
‘Yes. My Uncle was dying. Now he's not.’ Zheng replies.
‘I'm trying to understand what happened,
whether PhiCorp had anything to do with it. I believe this construction site is
key.’
‘I asked my uncle what happened. He told me
to never question a Miracle. You may not like what you find.’
‘He may be right.’
‘Call me back in a few hours.’ Stuart says.
Zheng Yibao heads down an
alleyway and shoots the lock off a metal gate. He sneaks inside the lot. Later
in the day, Stuart phones Zheng again.
High up on the roof of a
skyscraper, where the wind whips your face harder than a wet fish wielded by a
mad fishmonger Zheng reports back. There was nothing to see. It was a dead end.
He ends the call and joins the Shanghai 45 Club.
In San Pedro, Rex records
his statement for the camcorder. He states who he is and who he works for, then
pauses, and changes his mind. He’s not with the CIA, or any US government
authority.
‘I’m with Torchwood. And we’re gonna expose
everything that’s going on here, everything that I just witnessed.’ He pulls the painkillers from his
pocket that Vera had prescribed for him and feels bitter inside at her loss. He
pops a few pills to take the edge of his other pain.
‘They're calling them Category Ones, and
from what I've seen, don't ever let them call you that. The minute you hear
Category One, you'd better get the hell out of Dodge, because they are going to
burn you. That's what this place is for. Incineration. And we all know the
drill. They'll start with the Category Ones, the ones who can't protest. Then
they'll go on to convicted felons or illegal immigrants, hell, anyone we just
don't like, because everybody gets sick, which means one day everybody ends up
here. Those ovens are waiting for all of us. But I will tell you one thing. I'm
gonna find the bastard that killed Vera. Oh, yeah, and I'm gonna burn his ass.’ He growls.
Inside the office at San
Pedro camp, Esther tries unsuccessfully to get hold of Vera, unaware of what
has happened. Rachel downs tools. It’s home time, and since they don’t pay
overtime, she’s not going to stay a moment longer.
Outside, there’s a queue
to leave the camp.
As Rachel tells Esther
about money she can’t move from her bank, Esther notices Maloney walking alone,
and Vera nowhere in sight. She glances back at Rachel and makes her excuses.
‘Hey, I forgot my cell. You go on ahead. Don’t
wait for me.’
In Colin Maloney’s office,
Ralph is bricking it. He witnessed Maloney shooting the visiting doctor but not
what happened next. Colin is agitated, convincing himself that the matter has
been dealt with. Nobody would ever know. Ralph is falling apart. Although he
scrubbed his fingers raw, he knows that there would be evidence on him that
wouldn’t easily be removed. The tiny flecks of blood under the nails. He
demands to know what Colin did with the body.
Colin tries to justify his
actions, after changing his shirt, in case he should ever be able to get a game
of Badminton in, he convinces himself it’s not his fault, and as Ralph presses
him on the use of the Modules, he digs an even bigger hole for himself.
‘It's
the system. The module was storage. We were supposed to use it as storage until
some Senator signs some paperwork and gives the command. I just did things a
little early, that's all.’
‘But what did you do?’ Ralph persists.
Esther enters the Admin
office to find the next shift already at her desk. Playing her role perfectly,
she insists that the organisation who recruited them, hadn’t passed the message
down the line that Esther was to do a double shift, forcing the young woman out
of Esther’s seat, mumbling back out of the room. Esther keeps her eyes on the
two in Maloney’s office. Gathering up a handful of papers from her desk, she
knocks on the Office door and enters.
Maloney knows he can’t
trust anyone with what he’s done, and the more he tries to remain calm, the
more chaos enters his day to day life. Ralph continues to stand petrified
across the desk from him, as Esther informs Maloney that she has some forms for
him. Admitting she’s new, she has no idea what kind of forms they are.
He insists she leaves them
on his desk, then causes her to wonder after he explains his shirt change, for
a game of Badminton.
It takes her by surprise.
Gathering her thoughts, she asks if he would like something to drink. He doesn’t,
and insists she leaves his office. NOW!
As she leaves, Ralph
bleats.
‘Oh
my God, I did not agree to this.’
‘Everything’s gonna be fine.’ Maloney insists, if only to assure
himself.
‘But
we murdered her.’
‘No. No. The Modules were designed to kill,
therefore death within this compound is legal.’
Ralph knows that that can’t
be true, but Maloney is taking a stand. In his eyes, murder is legal, while on
the camp. She was fatally wounded, would never have survived. She was
technically a Category One.
Tony’s having a rough day.
While Esther tries to eavesdrop on Maloney, he decides to offload his troubles
on her, criticising the office staff who covered the day shift.
‘They’re illegal immigrants, all of them.
They can’t even spell. Look at this. This is wrong.’ He tells her, showing off every page of
misprints.
Inside the office, Ralph
continues to panic, while Maloney who is still trying to convince himself that
he’s in the clear, tells Ralph what he’s going to do next.
‘You're
gonna take her car and drive it into San Pedro. You know that shopping mall,
the Constitution Mall? Drop it off there. It's a huge car park, thousands of
cars. And we've got trucks that go past there every half hour, so just authorise
yourself a drive back. She goes missing, it's got nothing to do with us.’
Colin tells Ralph that he
needn’t worry about a thing as Vera Juarez is now just a pile of dust. Ralph
blanches.
‘Oh Jesus.’
Colin gives them an alibi.
‘And
we put this place on red alert, complete lockdown. Because lockdown means that
every member of the staff is logged and noted. It'll give us a perfect alibi.
She disappeared halfway across town while we were on duty all night.’
Maloney makes a call.
‘Security?
Yeah, give me the chief. We’re going to Condition One.’
Still filming out near the
Modules, activity is happening around him. Rex continues to record.
Soldiers mobilise and
begin Lockdown procedures. In the Admin department, Maloney informs his current
staff of the situation.
Outside, Rex is determined
to get the news out, somehow.
Esther tries to contact
Vera again and is instantly caught by Maloney.
‘I said it’s lockdown, miss, what is it?’ Maloney tries to remember her name.
Esther introduces herself
again and insists it was a call home. Maloney is adamant that no phone calls
will be allowed, reminding her to check the rule book. All exterior calls must
all be authorised by the man himself.
‘What about visitors, sir? Shouldn’t we
escort them out? Isn’t that observer still here? The one from Washington, Dr
Juarez?’
‘No, she left. She’s gone. As a matter of
fact, she said I was running an excellent command. Very good indeed. That’s her
exact words. Very good indeed.’
Esther is less than
convinced.
In Cowbridge Overflow
camp, Gwen seeks out Dr Patel who signed off on the papers for her Dad to be
marked down as Category One. Desperate to save him, Gwen insists that the young
Indian doctor change the details as he’s not as bad as she’s making out. Of
course, as Patel explains, letting one away would mean letting the others away
too. She has her orders, and that is it. It’s not her department.
Of course, that’s like waving
a red rag to a bull as far as Gwen Cooper is concerned, so it’s only a matter
of time before Gwen plans another breakout with her father, and this time she
aims to succeed.
In a Los Angeles bar,
Janet, the young secretary to Stuart is standing at the bar when she receives a
text from an unknown number. She replies, curiously. Captain Jack makes his
move and walks up to her.
‘No Janet, you don’t know me, but I know
you.’
Sounding like a creepy
stalker, Jack explains how he knows her and what he wants. Realising that Jack
is one of the good guys and her boss isn’t, Janet agrees to help him.
In a swanky restaurant in
LA, Jack leaves his great coat with a hot ‘coat boy’ and heads upstairs to
surprise Owens who is contemplating the salad.
‘I’d
go for the steak if I were you.’ Jack says, interrupting the date. ‘With a very large bourbon and a pack of
cigarettes. Why not? We’re gonna live forever, right, courtesy of PhiCorp?’
Owens tries to calm what
could be a fiery situation, insisting Jack may have the wrong table, but far
from it.
‘You're
Stuart Owens, aren't you? You're the Chief Operating Officer for PhiCorp
Industries.’
Impressed, Owens asks who
Jack is.
‘I’m
a friend of Janet’s, your secretary. We met at a bar, the one you were planning
on going to after dinner. Does your wife know?’
Jack hits a raw nerve; the
wife leaves them alone. Owens calls after her but Jack prevents him from
leaving, insisting that if he did, his associates holding Janet, would hurt
her. Aware that Owens would need proof, he hands over his mobile. Janet plays
her part convincingly.
Owens asks what Jack
wants.
‘The truth.’ Jack says, seated in Elizabeth’s chair.
‘About
what?’
‘The
Miracle. How was it done? Why was it done? How can it be undone?’
‘Why
would I have the answer?’
‘When the day came, PhiCorp was ready. We
found warehouses stocked with painkillers waiting for the Miracle to come
along.’
‘That's
your smoking gun?’
‘You're
a man in charge. You knew it was coming.’
‘Mister.’
‘Harkness.
Captain Jack Harkness.’
‘Are
you with the military?’
‘Freelance.
I represent the people who are trying to stop PhiCorp.’
‘So,
that security breach on the thirty third floor.’
‘That
was us.’ Jack says.
‘It's
not me you're after. In fact, I've been trying to find out the truth just as
much as you. I'm not a bad man, Mister Harkness.’
‘Captain.’ Jack insists.
‘I'm
not a bad man, Captain. I'm not a good one, either. I'm a middleman in every
sense of the word. And faced with the thought of being who I am for God knows
how long, I'm just as keen as you to find out exactly what's going on.
Especially with the stock market threatening to collapse, a man like me needs
insurance. You don't believe me. You think I'm the epitome of evil, the devil
in a three-piece suit.’
‘In my
experience, that's how it works.’
‘Your
experience must be rather simple. You have a rather archaic view of good versus
evil, don't you?’
‘Tell
me who's behind this.’
‘I've
been trying to find out. I've sent agents all over the world following the
paper trail, the backroom deals, the holding companies within holding
companies. That's when I came face to face with the true face of evil.’
‘The
system itself.’
‘Precisely.
If the schemes and conspiracies are being plotted, then they must be seen only
as patterns, waves, shifts that are either too small or too vast to be
perceived. Someone is playing the system right across planet Earth with
infinite grace, beyond any one person's sight. No, I'm sorry, Captain, but
PhiCorp isn't controlling this. Profiting, yes, but this is part of a much
larger design way beyond any of us.’
‘But
how can you be part of it and not know what's going on?’
‘Let
me give you an example. These warehouses full of drugs, no doubt you'd love to
uncover an incriminating memo dated the day before Miracle Day signed by me
authorising the stockpiling of painkillers. The truth is, a pattern like that
began say maybe five years ago with the systematic increase in production in
random factories around the world, based on market share projections. What was
the warehouse?’
‘Washington
DC, Third and Boston.’
‘I'd
imagine transportation of the drugs to the Third and Boston was then carried
out over a twelve-month period by, say, maybe five different haulage companies
outsourced to seven or eight different independent suppliers.’
‘So,
that means everyone's to blame.’ Jack says.
‘Everyone
and no one. Whoever is behind this, they don't show themselves. Not to me, not
to you. But to play the system like this, the markets, the politics, industry,
they had to be planning this for a very long time. I wish I knew who they were.’
‘I was
told that the miracle involves geography. Does that mean anything?’
‘No. But there is one word that my
operatives picked up dating back to the mid-nineties and then erased.’
‘What
is it?’
‘The
Blessing.’
‘What
does it mean?’
‘There
was a document from Italy from a source inside the Council of Ministers, a
contact then deceased. It simply referred to The Blessing. It said, they have
found The Blessing.’
Downstairs, the cavalry
have arrived.
‘It
seems my wife called the authorities. Hmm.’
Jack has gone.
At the San Pedro overflow camp, Rex has no way
out, unless… Taking the red peg from inside his jacket, he clips it onto the
lapel, knocks over a few barrels, and lies down on the ground, eyes closed. A
young guard hears the commotion and checks it out, only to be knocked out by
Rex when he leans too close to the ‘patient’. Changing into the young guard’s
clothing – the perfect fit – he responds to the man’s radio, when the older
guard tries to get his attention.
‘Billy,
do you read me, what’s going on?’
Rex informs him that he’s
needed at the Module. They need more men at the Module, and suggests he head
there pronto as he’s already there. Insisting that he didn’t listen when
discussion about the checkpoint was brought up, the older guard buys the new
instructions, knowing the younger guard wasn’t good at listening to commands.
Lucky break there, Rex!
Rex heads to the security
gate. He uses Billy’s card to open the security gate. A tannoy above his head
orders him to identity himself. Unsure of how he could get away with it,
mumbles that he’s going out for a smoke. Hoping again that there wouldn’t be a
huge party on the other side, he steps through, and is surprised by half the
platoon. Awkward!
‘Who
the hell are you?’
Ralph bursts into
Maloney’s office reporting back about Rex. A man with a camera breaching the
compound. Poor Ralph, any more trouble and he’s going to require a new pair of
briefs. Maloney too, and as much as he tries to convince himself that all is
fine, you can tell by his complexion that it hasn’t just crossed his mind that
Rex could ruin everything.
Esther can see the pair
flustering in the office and decides to try again with paperwork, insisting a
few forms require signatures. Maloney snaps. He doesn’t require Esther to walk
with him anywhere, and as she heads out after Ralph, Tony calls her back. The
annoying, irritable man who has read his Rule book, knows it inside out and
back to front, insists Esther remains in the Department.
‘How
blonde are you? It’s a lockdown. We haven’t got clearance. Got to stay at your
desk.’
In the Generator Room at
the San Pedro Camp, poor Rex is chained to a metal strut. He shouts at Maloney,
angry at the way his girlfriend was treated, hurt and broken, his shirt open
revealing his chest wound, he continues to berate Maloney as he enters the
room. Maloney dismisses the soldiers.
‘I need to know who you are.’ Maloney says. Rex has already given his
details to the soldiers but does it again, demanding to know who he’s talking
to. Maloney fills him in of his position as Director of the San Pedro facility.
Rex, despite chained and helpless, insists that as the head of the facility,
Maloney stands to face the charges of the injustices happening in the San Pedro
facility. Of course, Maloney, heart sinking realises that the net is tightening
and begins to break down. But curiously, looks at the footage that Rex has
taken, yet still denies that what he’s seeing is real.
Rex of course, at this
point has no idea that the man he’s barking at, murdered his girlfriend. He
tries to turn it around, hoping that Maloney will become the hero, and give the
information to the police. It’s damning evidence of what is going on inside the
Compound.
Esther meanwhile knows
something is wrong and needs to get out of the office. She pops her head around
the door and asks Ralph the details of the man caught breaching the compound
and finds out his current location. Despite calls from Tony that nobody leaves
the office, she heads out regardless.
‘I’m
reporting you.’ Shouts Tony.
Maloney, tears in his
eyes, watches the death of Vera Juarez in technicolour. He’s crying.
Esther spies Maloney’s
golf cart parked outside the Generator building.
Maloney spots Rex’s scar
and pats his trousers, muttering to himself. Rex frowns. The man is clearly
distraught, but no amount of convincing him to call the authorities will snap
him out of what he’s currently doing. Rex hopes he’s looking for a set of keys
to release him.
‘I
just can’t focus, can’t think. I’ve never been too practical. I’m more of an
ideas man. I’m very good at Badminton.’ Maloney mutters. He produces a pen
from his top pocket. ‘It’ll have to do.’
Stepping towards Rex, who is curious of the pen, until Maloney moves the fabric
of his shirt away from the wound, exposing it fully, shouts and begs for the
man, not to do anything stupid,
raises his voice, begging and screaming in pain as the pen is pushed into the
wound, causing blood to pour from the wound. It’s then that Rex realises, that
Maloney is the killer.
‘It was you.’
‘I’m sorry.’ Maloney sobs.
‘You
killed her.’
‘I’m very sorry. It’s just been such a long
day. All I want to do is go home.’
Again, he pushes the pen into Rex’s body, forcing more blood to pour from the
exposed wound.
His cries of pain alert
Esther to his whereabouts, and she innocently calls out to Maloney, distracting
him. She informs him of a phone call back in the office. It’s Vera, calling for
him. At this point, only Esther is in the dark. Rex calls out to her. Tells her
to run. Tells her that Vera is dead. Maloney is the killer.
Her reactions are too
slow. Maloney needs to tidy this situation up. Fast. He grabs Esther by the
hair and slams her into a wall, and starts laying into her. Esther fights back,
gouging her thumbs into Maloney’s eyes. Further tussles and he’s trying to
strangle the life out of her. Esther wrestles free and in a double handed hold,
crushes Maloney’s windpipe. The man stops fighting and remains still.
Distraught, she goes to
Rex, tears in her eyes. The Watch Analyst has turned into a field agent, and
this was her first kill. Except, as Rex explains, nobody dies. He needs to get
free and insists that she return to the body and get the keys for the cuffs.
After returning and fishing them out of his pocket, she makes to leave as
Maloney grabs her ankle and brings her crashing to the floor. This time he’s
got the perfect strangle hold, and there’s nothing Esther can do.
Ralph fires a shot and
Maloney falls to the side, relieving the pressure on Esther’s throat.
‘This
has got to stop.’
Grateful, Esther thanks
him and returns to Rex.
At the Overflow camp in
Cowbridge, Rhys finds a perfect truck for transporting his father in law. It’s
still got the keys in. As he’s prepared to move, Pidgeon knocks on the window,
and demands to know what he’s doing.
‘My
job, isn’t it? Don’t scare a man like that.’ Rhys snaps at him, heart still
recovering.
‘Patient
transfer at this time of night?’ Pidgeon queries.
Rhys tells him it’s his
job, that his supervisor gave him the orders for the patient transfer at 5 am.
Pidgeon asks the name of the supervisor.
‘Captain Jack Harkness.’ Rhys replies. ‘He ordered me.’
Pidgeon didn’t see the
name listed and went off to make some calls. Rhys waited. Over at the other
side of the Overflow camp, Gwen waited also. It was getting late, and Rhys
would have ‘Hell to pay’ if he didn’t turn up soon.
‘Not
long now Dad, I promise.’
Pidgeon comes back to
Rhys. There’s no movement for another hour. After more discussions, Pidgeon
goes off to make another phone call. Rhys, tired of waiting a moment longer,
drives off.
With more patients, due to
arrive soon from abroad, two hospital staff prepare to move the Category Ones
to the Ovens. Gwen begins to push her Dad’s trolley bed out towards the soon to
be waiting Rhys. It’s a tight squeeze, weaving around many of the rooms, and
one door proves difficult, but thanks to a cleaner, she can get through.
Rhys is full of apologies
as Gwen berates him for his tardiness.
‘I
was on time, only this officious bastard held me up.’
‘Why didn’t you just run him over or
something?’
‘I’m not the running over type, you know
that. Anyway, I drove off when this silly bugger was on the phone. He’s
probably followed me.’
They opened the tailgate
and got the old Dad into the back of the truck just at the moment the patrol
came around the corner.
‘Take
Dad home.’ Gwen instructs Rhys.
‘There’s something I’ve got to do here before I go to the States.’
‘You’re going back to America?’ Rhys is shocked.
‘We’ve got to find out what’s behind all of
this, and put a stop to it once and for all. But before I do, I haven’t
finished with this place yet.’
As Pidgeon spots Rhys, and
Rhys spots Pidgeon, Gwen pulls him into a kiss before they go their separate
ways.
Discarding her nurses
uniform, Gwen pops into a bathroom and puts in the Eye-5 contact lenses and
hopes someone back at the base is listening.
Jack is searching for any
mention of The Blessing when the Eye-5 software comes alive on screen.
‘Hello. Anybody home?’
‘You’re a sight for sore eyes.’ Jack smiles typing his response.
‘Jack, is that you?’
‘In the flesh. You OK?’
From her vantage point,
Gwen informs Jack that she’s coming back, to the fight, but after finding a box
of plastic explosives, she’s just got something she’d like to show him. Tilting
the mirror so Jack can see what’s about to happen, informing her that he’s
opened up the radio link, so she can send her message.
‘This
is the truth for the whole world to see. We let our governments build
concentration camps. They built ovens for people in our names. Now I don't care
if the whole of society bends over and takes this like a dog, I'm saying NO.’
Gwen detonates the plastic
explosives, destroying all the Modules. Jack laughed heartily.
‘That’s my girl.’
Outside the San Pedro
Overflow Camp, Esther is far from calm. In her haste to be part of the work
team, she had submitted her own name. She would be on the system. Rex calms her as best he can. She’d saved his life. She’d become the lion and not the
mouse. He knew this was still new to her.
‘It’s OK, you’re allowed to feel like this.’ He hugged her. ‘This is not over, not for Torchwood, and I need you in this fight.’
In the apartment, Jack,
Esther and Rex watch the television. The News forecaster shows the horrors of
what the Overflow camps would rather you didn’t see. Jack’s pleased, Rex less
so.
Despite all their best efforts, the Press
Secretary announces that there will be no backing down on the crisis of the
Category Ones process. It will carry on as normal.
‘You see that, they should be shutting down
those camps right now. They’re just talking about it.’
‘At least we’ve made it public.’ Esther says.
‘Torchwood wasn’t designed to fight
politicians. If we really want to stop this happening, we need to look at the
bigger picture, find out what the Blessing is.’ Jack tells them.
Gwen arrives back on US
soil and calls her husband for the umpteenth time. Still no answer. Leaving
another message, she hears her name called on the tannoy, and hurries towards
the white courtesy phone.
‘This
is Gwen Cooper. Hello, this is Gwen Cooper, you said I had a message.’
‘Lenses.’
‘What? What did you say?’
‘Lenses.’
Staggered by who else
would know about Torchwood’s Eye-5 software. In the restroom she applies the
lenses and stares at the mirror in front of her. She receives a message that
rocks her to the core.
‘We
have your mother. We have your husband. We have your child.’
‘Who. Who are…Who are you? What do you want?
What do you want!’
After a pause, she
receives the answer.
‘Bring us Jack.’
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